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May 30th, 2012, 4:29 pm

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searo,

May 30th, 2012, 4:32 pm

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The Crossing soft launch yolo
i mean
Hello! This is the first issue of what the gang has been working on. Neroe made this one. Please comment and tell us what you think! It means a lot.

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Rage,

May 30th, 2012, 5:10 pm

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His sword is from Disgaea, amirite?

Bringer_of_light,

May 30th, 2012, 6:00 pm

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hell if I know

Shard,

May 30th, 2012, 6:08 pm

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Speaking of his sword, where'd he pull it from?

cqclegoman,

May 30th, 2012, 7:23 pm

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Question:

Are the sprites/backgrounds custom? If they are, incredible! If not, still cool!

The effects are looking swell. However, the use of blur on the background in every panel is really annoying. Though it worked well in the scene with the blonde kid, as the sword fighting wasn't of importance.

But in every panel, fffff.

More nitpicks, maybe center the text in the speech bubbles? Pretty please?

And last but not least, whether you take any of my 'advice' if I even know what I'm talking about, none of it will matter as long as the characters are developed and you have a good story written! The plot drives the characters and the characters develop the story!

(Seriously though, dudes, it's only the first page. I'm sure you have an excellent comic planned! :P all my favorites to you!)

Bringer_of_light,

May 30th, 2012, 7:52 pm

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They are not custom, unfortunatly. We used a generator and edited them from there.

As for the blurs, Van made me do it... He said it looked sophisticated... He hit me when I disobeyed him... Im sorry Van ;_;

And yeah, I'll center the speech bubbles.

cqclegoman,

May 31st, 2012, 8:05 am

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If you don't fix those damn blurs I'll hit you harder.

Grimmjow,

May 31st, 2012, 9:14 am

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My nemesis... The Mobile interface...
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Bringer_of_light,

May 31st, 2012, 1:22 pm

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@cqclegoman: Well hold up there buddy!
We have some premade THAT I CANT FIX D:
Dont hit me ;_;

cqclegoman,

May 31st, 2012, 4:10 pm

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I'll forgive you, for now.

When those premades end, Marly will be with me to deliver the beating.

girldirtbiker,

February 23rd, 2015, 10:56 pm

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The page image is broken on my end, not sure if anyone else sees it or its just me

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